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21
Feb
2010
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Aperture and the book

So Apple squeezed out a new edition of Aperture (and it’s actually rather good). It’s just unfortunate that it’s come now as I’m contracted to write a new edition of this book

The deadline is mid-April.

Fortunately that’s eminently do-able. It just means that the novel is going to have to take a bit of a back seat for a little while.

Is that a good thing? Yes, and no, I think.

No, because I’m really enjoying it. I never resent opening the same old file yet again, as I have done almost every day for most of the last year, meeting the same characters, working out whether they’re saying what they should the way they ought.

Yes, because it might do me good to have a break.

I read that Stephen King recommends putting your work aside for six weeks between writing and starting on the edit. I didn’t do this, so maybe I didn’t have a chance to step away from the words and view them a few weeks later with a fresh, unsympathetic eye.

Enforced exile could do me good. And it could do the book good, too.

01
Dec
2009
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Editing the book

It’s a while since I’ve written about the book, mainly because I’ve been so busy editing the thing.

It’s a big job. Some days I can work my way through three or four pages of the stuff I’ve already written. On others, three paragraphs would be something of an achievement. Am I taking too long over it? I don’t think so. There’s no point racing through and ending up with something you’re not happy with and clearly won’t sell.

I also know that this edit, making a second draft, won’t be the only one. I can see how it has improved so far, but I also know where it could yet be better. Even looking at the first couple of chapters, which I was quite happy with following the first thorough edit, I can see where a few little tweaks here and there could make things better still.

Fortunately I have two very helpful readers who have been running through it with pen in hand to pick out the bits that don’t quite work. It’s been very instructional and incredibly helpful, in large part because their points of concern have pretty much mirrored my own, which would suggest my self-criticism is valid. I’m also relieved that as we tend to agree on the points of issue I’m not kidding myself that it’s all great. That would be awful.

So the book is coming along and I’m now at the end of the second draft of the first five chapters. But that’s not the last chapter, and it’s far from the last edit, too.

07
Oct
2009
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A lengthy edit

Editing the book is going to take a long time, I think. I’m about half way through chapter one at the moment – on only the first edit – and already been at it two weeks. There are 33 chapters in all, so you can work out for yourself how long it would take to complete at that rate.

And then, of course, you’d start on the second edit.

I looked at the stats for chapter one and it’s taken 943 minutes so far. That’s editing and writing. Or, in other words, 15 hours 43 minutes. It sounds like a lot until you realise that it’s actually less than two working days. The trouble is, when your working days are taken up actually working, you don’t have that much time for writing and editing.

Chapter statistics in Word

30
Sep
2009
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Writing

Bringing your characters to life

The Writers and Artists Yearbook blog has some excellent advice for giving your novel life. Particularly at the editing stage, where I find myself now:

…ask yourself in each scene what is at stake for the various characters involved. If there is no great danger: either of someone’s long buried secret being revealed, or fortune, life, or honour being lost, then there is little motivation for the reader to keep on.

23
Sep
2009
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Finishing up, ready to edit

I’ve finished my book… and I’m one paragraph short.

I swear, finding the right words on which to tie it all up is more difficult than the whole of the rest of it combined. There won’t be a sequel, so I don’t need to find something commercial and open-ended that will bring the characters back. That, at least, is something, but how do you tie up the final loose end when all of the others have been brought to a logical and satisfying conclusion?

Anyhow, 83,464 words done, and in fairly short order. I started the week after Easter, when I’d outlined the premise at dinner in Darlington and thought that if it was ever going to be more than a brief synopsis I ought to put in some work.

Now I need to go back through for the first edit and rewrite and, you know what, I’m really quite looking forward to it. I loved writing it, and actually looked forward to sitting down and getting my fingers on the keyboard, and now that I feel like I know the characters so much better I can direct them more effectively and make their dialogue better fit their personalities.

There will be some cringe-worthy bits, of course, but that’s what rewrites are for: ironing out, rounding off, and excising the worst of your literary excesses before they escape.

17
Jun
2009
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Book progress

45,369 words.

Of course I’m not going to gauge success on the number of words I’ve written. Neither am I going to proclaim it ‘finished’ when I hit a certain number. It’s finished when the story is told.

Crossing the 45,000-word mark this morning, though, was a bit of a happy moment as I’ve set myself a vague 90,000 word aim (target is too strong a word, I think), as conventional wisdom appears to be that the count that most publishers are looking out for is somewhere between 80,000 and 100,000 for a first-time novelist.

Reaching 45,369, with half of the story told, then, means that I’m pretty much in line to get there without making it unsaleably long, or so brief it would fit in a pamphlet. It’s 50.41% of 90,000 words.

So, what is 90,000 words in terms of regular book print? Well, looking around on the web most people seem to estimate around 10 words per line, with 25 lines per page in the average novel. So that would be 250 words to the page.

On that basis 90,000 words would run to 360 pages.

It’s not an exact science, of course. If you have a lot of dialogue you’ve probably written fewer words on each line with more lines overall, but it’s interesting to do the maths.

10
Jun
2009
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What I’m writing

Here’s a secret: I’m writing a book.

Not the first, granted, although somehow I managed to forget to write about the Aperture book once it had been published and arrived in my hands. Don’t know why – it took months to put it together and despite some misgivings I have signed the contract for a second edition.

Anyhow, this isn’t that. This is fiction.

I had an idea for a story at the start of the year which matured over the next few months, pretty much until we went to the Dales at Easter, in fact. By then it was more or less worked out in my mind, and one evening I mentioned it at dinner and ended up sketching out the story. I hadn’t planned on doing that, but it’s probably as well that I did, as everyone said they wanted to read it.

So, on the train home, I started to write.

And it’s going surprisingly well. My characters are behaving, they’re saying the things I want them to say, and they’re not going off down any unexpected tracks. The secret, as I’ve discovered, is careful, extensive planning. It’s the only way you can keep them in control. After all, if you don’t know where you need to take them, you shouldn’t be surprised if they wander off on their own.

Skipping that stage was the cause of my downfall last time around. Back then I raced off with nothing but a word-count in sight and the results were, frankly, rubbish. It all petered out at 115,000 words, when the story was only half way told.

I’ve looked back at it since and it’s trash. And contrived trash at that.

Re-reading that blog entry, I can see that I’d managed to put down 50,000 words in three weeks, which should have told me something fairly obvious. Apparently it didn’t. This time, in a couple of months of writing I’d done 40,000 words. A respectable total, and one with which I’m satisfied, as I know this time around that the story has integrity.

That’s why the characters are behaving themselves: I know where they need to go, and I know what they need to say in every conversation. I also know who they are, how they got where they are, and how this defines their motivation for every move and spoken word.

It’s very fulfilling, but much harder work than I’d imagined. I’m determined to see it through, though. Hence this entry. Now that I’ve admitted I’m doing it, I have to finish it.

Watch this space.